Luna Eva Longbottom (Lovegood)

[Luna Longbottom]

FULL NAME:Luna Eva Longbottom

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NICKNAMES:None

AGE:58

BIRTHDAY:Septmber 14

OCCUPATION:History of Magic Professor

BLOOD STATUS:Pureblood

HOUSE:Ravenclaw

SEXUALITY:Striaght

ALLEGIANCE:Good

WAND: 11 3/4 one hippogriff and phoinex feather and willow

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HAIR: Blonde

EYES: Blue

HEIGHT/WEIGHT:5'11", 125

BUILD: Skinny

DISTINGUISHING MARKS: burn mark on the tip of of right index finger

PERSONAL STYLE: Casul

FACE CLAIM: Avril Lavigne

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LIKES:her daughter Melissa, her husband Neville, history, Herebology, magic, wand, freedom, school, reading, teaching[/b]

DISLIKES:bad people, people who thinks she is weird,strawberries,blueberrys, watermelons,bananas, muggle stuff, dark magic, modern music, hiking

AMORMENTIA: wild flowers, candy, feast

BOGGART: death of her and her daughter

ERISED: her father and husband and mother

PATRONUS: Hare

DEMENTOR: her husbands death

STRENGTHS:determanation, fast, quick learner, history, other people, good spell caster, her daughter, magical creatures, and the defeanse of the dark arts, quick thinker

WEAKNESSES: dark magic, reading, alcohol, dark objects, flirting, can be crazy, can be weird, jeaously, can be mean ,envy

SECRET HUSH: Practice the dark arts when little

OVERALL PERSONALITY: Luna is a casul sophisacated girl living in her own world, she loves the way magic is and how she can people with it. She is wild and crazy when around her daughter, but more modest in public. she leans more to knowing how magic was created and the proper way to use it.

She can get emotional with some situation. she loves her daughter, loves the world and loves magic.
she has a fear that her daughter might get mixed in with the wrong crowd and wants to be with her to help her and to comfront her in bad situations.

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FATHER: Xeno Lovegood

MOTHER: Mary Lovegood

SIBLINGS: None

PERSONS OF IMPORTANCE: Melissa Longbottom

SIGNIFICENT OTHER: None

HOMETOWN: Birmingham, England

RESIDENCE NOW: Godric Hollow

RICH OR RAGS: Rich

OVERALL HISTORY: Luna grow up with her father working at a newspaper, her mother died when she was three, because she worked for the Mibstery and was testing spells and one back fired. She first did magic on her father when she was 9, she made is foot grow two sizes.

She later went to Hogwarts to get her Magic Education. Her first four years went by and it was horrible people calling her Lunny Lovegood. In her first year she made a friend by the name of Ginny Weasly.In her second year she was hexed by Draco Malfoy almost every day. In her 5th year she Meet the Boy Who Lived( Harry Potter).

She later helped Harry fight dark wizards known as Death Eaters and caught a glemce of what was really going on her next year at Hogwarts the Head Master Dumbledore was Murdered by Potions Professor Snape. Her next year at hogwarts she was taken captive by death eaters and was hidden until Harry his friends Ron and Hermine came and recused her Dean Thomas and Mr. Olivander. She returned to hogwarts the next year and graduated top in her class.

She later worked at Olivanders and married Neville Longbottom with in this time now and the time she married neville she had a girl named Melissa. Her husband was Killed by mistake when he too was testing spells with Ron Weasly.Her father past away shorty after due to Heart attack, Luna was really upset about this that she moved to a place that can not be named until she move back th godric hollow.{

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ALIAS: Dylan

AGE:17

EXPERIENCE:1 year

GENDER:Male

RP SAMPLE: Luna looked out the window wondering what was going to happen when she got the job to be th History of Magic Professor. Would she be teaching her daughter, would she be good, will her students enjoy her.

All of this was runing throw her head. she sat up and called for her daughter."Melissa Come here i want to ask you something"

Melissa aproach her "yes Mother"

"What do you think about me teaching History of Magic"

"I would like that"

"I know you woundn't mind me teaching. But the thing is i'm not sure that you can take my class,I know you have to to graduate."

"Mom i will take your class no its, ands, or buts about it."

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[Devon Whiltshire]

Hey, thanks for registering. Let's take a look at your app.

1) The image at the top isn't coming in.
2) This takes place in the year 2030. Luna would be much older than 36, since she was born in '82.
3) Personality is going to need to be at least two to three good sized paragraphs. Explain to me how she acts around people, is she outgoing or reserved, explain to me some of her traits, ect.
4) History needs more-- Explain to me about her childhood some more. When was the first time she did magic? How did her mother die? What were her first four years at Hogwarts like before she met Harry? How did Neville die and what did Luna feel like after he Father passed away? Adding details here and there will really help.
5) There is a lot of grammatical and spelling errors in this post. If you could please "Spell Check" (right next to the Preview Button), we would very much appreciate it.

This is a Major Canon Character, so it will need to be rather impressive.

Thanks, and if you need any help feel free to ask.
-Dev

[Devon Whiltshire]

1) The image you picked isn't working. Please pick another.
2) There are still many spelling mistakes throughout the post. Please Spell Check all of them.
3) Personality is better, but please seperate the paragraphs and use proper grammar (Capitalize your Sentences, ect) while writing.
4) Space youe History out and use periods and proper grammar. Also, the one sentence about her first four years of school won't cut it. A few sentences, at least.

-Devon

[Devon Whiltshire]

1) Make sure all or most words are spelled correctly please. Quite a few typos.
2) At the beginning of a sentence, capitalize.
3) Add a little more to your RP Sample.

Once you do that, you should be good.
-Devon

[Devon Whiltshire]

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Go on and Role-Play now.
-Devon