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Post by Melissa Longbottom on Jun 14, 2009 23:31:24 GMT -5
[/color][/font][/size][/center] nameMelissa Luna Longbottom age11 experience11 J U S T YOUR W I T C H C R A F T full name Melissa Luna Longbottom genderFemale ageeleven blood statuspureblood househufflepuff year1st pbhilliary duff cliam A L L THE W A N D L O R E likespeple who are loyal dislikesmean people strengthscasting spells weaknessesdueling more than one person quirksloves to fly personalityMelissa is a aweet loving girl who has a bet of a temperwhen it comes to people she does not like.she like to use her magic skills to help people. can be friends with any one. love to fly on her very expensive fire bolt broom stick. H I S T O R Y OF M A G I C family membersparents are neville longbottom and luna lovegood detailed historyluna was born onjune 8th under the planet jupiter and sign gemini. her father died shorty after.her mother works for the minstery. lives in godric hollow. where when was growing up played with other wizards and witches Y O U R DARK S I D E meilssa woke the morning before her departure. "mom we need to go to diagon alley to get the rest of my stuff" |
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Post by Jensen Jameson on Jun 14, 2009 23:40:49 GMT -5
Pending Again, welcome to the site. There are a few things that need to be worked on and are listed below.
1.) Likes and Dislikes, you need to list at least ten.
2.) Strengths and Weaknesses, list five.
3.) Personality needs to be at least eight sentences long.
4.) History. Being that you are the daughter of two cannon characters, you need to give us a basic outline of from the time your character was born, up to being accepted into Hogwarts. At least two paragraphs.
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Post by Melissa Longbottom on Jun 14, 2009 23:56:51 GMT -5
name
Melissa Luna Longbottom
age
11
experience
11
J U S T YOUR W I T C H C R A F T
full name Melissa Luna Longbottom
genderFemale
age
eleven
blood status
pureblood
house
hufflepuff
year
1st
pb
hilliary duff cliam
A L L THE W A N D L O R E
likes
people who are loyal, people who are just, the Potters, the Wealsys, roses,the sun,rabits, bangers,bumble bees the color yellow
dislikes
mean people, steps, stairs, Malfoys, rain, water, plants, bugs, under ground, making potions
strengths
casting spells, casting charms, learning more that expected, thinking, flying
weaknesses
dueling more than one person, easy to trip, doesn't think to well, easy to pick on, casting hexes
quirks
loves to fly
personality
Melissa is a aweet loving girl who has a bet of a temperwhen it comes to people she does not like.she like to use her magic skills to help people. can be friends with any one. love to fly on her very expensive fire bolt broom stick.
H I S T O R Y OF M A G I C
family members
parents are neville longbottom and luna lovegood
detailed history
luna was born on june 8th under the planet jupiter and sign gemini. her father died shorty after.her mother works for the minstery. lives in godric hollow. where when was growing up played with other wizards and witches. at the age of 7 made her house catch on fir but was quickly put out. her mom luna believe that Melissa sould learn a muggle musicla instrument and melissa started playing the clarinet. she found that her patronus is a mongoose(animal that eats snakes) at the age of 10
Y O U R DARK S I D E
Quote:what is theory when the question that is asked has no answer
meilssa woke the morning before her departure.
"mom we need to go to diagon alley to get the rest of my stuff"
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Post by Jensen Jameson on Jun 15, 2009 0:13:21 GMT -5
Everything looks fine. The only thing I do ask from you, in future reference and this is friendly advice. Please remember to post at least a paragraph when role playing. Two lines won't cut it here, it's what most people call spam and it annoys a lot of them. So from here on out, one paragraph containing 6-8 sentences each. Ok  |
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